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Take your ship out to sea and bring laurels blessed with holly on this journey to unearth treasure troves  hidden in the gossamer waves Let your flag sail high in wind and crane your neck high among floods that rage in endless sickness and fledgling health Chests of gems and gilded bands await at the edge miles numbering thousands unfettered to all but time Rally your spirits and hang them by the sails  so passing shipmen may see the bones upon this watery hull and chant for boundless Someday Storms await and creep like snakes through flumes of silver clouds the tears they wring rocks the fleet and dyes dry skin vermilion Famine prays to fish for food  while brine coats the shattered deck parched crewmen beg to die in sandy oases  surrounded by undrinkable water  Promises and tears the only drinks now pain tattooed to flesh gold glows neither in caves nor does it shimmer in light However many years pass as eternities brighter dreams mark crystal soils and platinum trees plump with diamond fruit float atop the promised land Though the ship has weathered shattered frame and dried blood lines your chest the anchor dives through watery shore  and cries through salt land **  Sands crunch loud underfoot like God's soft muse skies hum  no treasure lies here but an ashen tree and the whispering wind begins to cry my fortunate babe, you've arrived
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Jul 11, 2017
Jul 11, 2017 at 9:30 PM UTC
Promised Land
Take your ship out to sea and bring laurels blessed with holly on this journey to unearth treasure troves  hidden in the gossamer waves Let your flag sail high in wind and crane your neck high among floods that rage in endless sickness and fledgling health Chests of gems and gilded bands await at the edge miles numbering thousands unfettered to all but time Rally your spirits and hang them by the sails  so passing shipmen may see the bones upon this watery hull and chant for boundless Someday Storms await and creep like snakes through flumes of silver clouds the tears they wring rocks the fleet and dyes dry skin vermilion Famine prays to fish for food  while brine coats the shattered deck parched crewmen beg to die in sandy oases  surrounded by undrinkable water  Promises and tears the only drinks now pain tattooed to flesh gold glows neither in caves nor does it shimmer in light However many years pass as eternities brighter dreams mark crystal soils and platinum trees plump with diamond fruit float atop the promised land Though the ship has weathered shattered frame and dried blood lines your chest the anchor dives through watery shore  and cries through salt land **  Sands crunch loud underfoot like God's soft muse skies hum  no treasure lies here but an ashen tree and the whispering wind begins to cry my fortunate babe, you've arrived
I'd like to think this poem is about the struggles of aspirations. The floundering steps toward unreachable goals gilded by our flawed expectations. We are like shipmen, floating perpetually toward a distance that may never come, losing much along the way in pursuit of an ideal future. But often, reality is something else entirely. It is up to you to decide what this reality means, and whether or not it is worth the price.
aj-jacono
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Jul 11, 2017
Jul 11, 2017 at 9:30 PM UTC
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