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You look into my eyes, and I get so excited inside, smiling, my heartbeat rising, shining, such a ray of sunshine, sweet paradise at the right time, so divine, your body giving me all the signs of lucid loving, harmonious highs hovering in the bright cerulean sky. I got you on my mind, and I can’t stop hoping that somehow you can see that you and me are meant to be, come to me with your caring and joyful heart where I don’t have to look so far to seep in your glorious land of dreams, welcome your embrace, make me escape inside your flowering nakedness. I imagine us bathing in a tub of bathwater together, consoling each other, kissing, touching, rubbing, our hands making water bubbles and blowing them out. I dream of you wrapping your arms around me, your chin pressed on my shoulders, your cheeks caressing mine, telling me how much you adore me, how there’s no one in the world like me, how you will never abandon me for another. I can’t help but love all the things that you do, how your fineness is irreproachable, so lucky to have a glowing rose like you, a great gem that illuminates my aura. I get so lost in your visions love, incapable of holding back, wanting to give my all to you, to lean into your serenity, wallowing in your charming world, everything so precious and coveted, refreshing to the soul, pure poetry dipped in delicious honey. I write you into my life a thousand times and more, each time reorganizing the lines to make the words flow so smoothly, to read each stanza in silence and marvel at my penmanship, how the syllables and vowels elevate to higher escapes, how the verbs and adverbs stir my starry spirit, how the prepositions and gerunds glisten in their own light, how the similes sparkle and stream with the magnificent metaphors, giving me the deepest feelings ever.
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Dec 20, 2020
Dec 20, 2020 at 9:34 PM UTC
The Deepest Feelings Ever
You look into my eyes, and I get so excited inside, smiling, my heartbeat rising, shining, such a ray of sunshine, sweet paradise at the right time, so divine, your body giving me all the signs of lucid loving, harmonious highs hovering in the bright cerulean sky. I got you on my mind, and I can’t stop hoping that somehow you can see that you and me are meant to be, come to me with your caring and joyful heart where I don’t have to look so far to seep in your glorious land of dreams, welcome your embrace, make me escape inside your flowering nakedness. I imagine us bathing in a tub of bathwater together, consoling each other, kissing, touching, rubbing, our hands making water bubbles and blowing them out. I dream of you wrapping your arms around me, your chin pressed on my shoulders, your cheeks caressing mine, telling me how much you adore me, how there’s no one in the world like me, how you will never abandon me for another. I can’t help but love all the things that you do, how your fineness is irreproachable, so lucky to have a glowing rose like you, a great gem that illuminates my aura. I get so lost in your visions love, incapable of holding back, wanting to give my all to you, to lean into your serenity, wallowing in your charming world, everything so precious and coveted, refreshing to the soul, pure poetry dipped in delicious honey. I write you into my life a thousand times and more, each time reorganizing the lines to make the words flow so smoothly, to read each stanza in silence and marvel at my penmanship, how the syllables and vowels elevate to higher escapes, how the verbs and adverbs stir my starry spirit, how the prepositions and gerunds glisten in their own light, how the similes sparkle and stream with the magnificent metaphors, giving me the deepest feelings ever.
travis-green
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30/M/Middlesex, NC
Dec 20, 2020
Dec 20, 2020 at 9:34 PM UTC
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