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Today I asked my Daddy to buy me shoes, but then I changed my option of the pair! He then screamed at me, saying I had bad views. That had me crying, as I walked slowly upstair(s). When my Mother heard my sobbing's sniffle(s), she accused of me at being "just like a baby". To me, her statement seemed like a riddle, thinking it meant she thought I was crazy! As I wept of short breath, slowly to my room, I started to shake with my pounding heart. It had me think I was doom(ed), knowing I was just off the chart...
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Sep 17, 2017
Sep 17, 2017 at 9:53 PM UTC
Today's Panic Attack
Today I asked my Daddy to buy me shoes, but then I changed my option of the pair! He then screamed at me, saying I had bad views. That had me crying, as I walked slowly upstair(s). When my Mother heard my sobbing's sniffle(s), she accused of me at being "just like a baby". To me, her statement seemed like a riddle, thinking it meant she thought I was crazy! As I wept of short breath, slowly to my room, I started to shake with my pounding heart. It had me think I was doom(ed), knowing I was just off the chart...
This sad poem is in ABAB form. It has 100 words, as my other works do too.
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Sep 17, 2017
Sep 17, 2017 at 9:53 PM UTC
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