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I ache for my first kiss Just a taste from her lips An embrace from her warmth Like the light in her heart Kiss me in the light Where the sun shines To where we first met In the middle of Tibet So listen to what I say I love you and I would stay No matter where we at I love you till my death Beyond the stars and back
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Apr 19, 2015
Apr 19, 2015 at 4:03 PM UTC
Darkest Desire
I ache for my first kiss Just a taste from her lips An embrace from her warmth Like the light in her heart Kiss me in the light Where the sun shines To where we first met In the middle of Tibet So listen to what I say I love you and I would stay No matter where we at I love you till my death Beyond the stars and back
I just want to say I dont know anything about Poetry unfortunately. So every time I write, I hope that it comes out alright. So i really appreciate it if you review it so I can work on my skills. Thank you for reading :)
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Apr 19, 2015
Apr 19, 2015 at 4:03 PM UTC
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