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#†           †           †     When the ****** lost souls are voided into the abyss of hell I hope to have avoided that last death-knell. The blood of Christ assures me that such can be admitted. I pray it sanctifies me – desires permitted. They preach of joy unending of sheer expanding praise, but the unseen evidence lingers: my carnal ways: I flash on astral hotties (the flames that life denied) among celestial bodies beyond the great divide. I muse on raptured virgins; Christ’s parables made flesh and my unspoken longings unveiled and fresh. I long to know profoundly the promised stellar faces – or sleep so deep,  so soundly no dreams leave traces. My hopes for that dimension alloyed with base designs grow vague. Incomprehension misreads the signs.
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Sep 11, 2015
Sep 11, 2015 at 7:51 AM UTC
Heaven
#†           †           †     When the ****** lost souls are voided into the abyss of hell I hope to have avoided that last death-knell. The blood of Christ assures me that such can be admitted. I pray it sanctifies me – desires permitted. They preach of joy unending of sheer expanding praise, but the unseen evidence lingers: my carnal ways: I flash on astral hotties (the flames that life denied) among celestial bodies beyond the great divide. I muse on raptured virgins; Christ’s parables made flesh and my unspoken longings unveiled and fresh. I long to know profoundly the promised stellar faces – or sleep so deep,  so soundly no dreams leave traces. My hopes for that dimension alloyed with base designs grow vague. Incomprehension misreads the signs.
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Sep 11, 2015
Sep 11, 2015 at 7:51 AM UTC
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