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My first American love was 4 inches taller than me, had a muscular upper body, (all they did were push-ups, day, and night, day and night) and stood on skinny legs, pale; mustached by thin, fine brown hairs They wore pants, nothing but jeans, black mostly, sometimes faded when they weren't clean; sometimes denim if they were purchased by me (They had to be Levi or Calvin Klein) And their tops had torn sleeves; holes punched in everywhere due to the moths in the closet; nothing but torn seams It was rare they wore anything else We first made love in a 2004 Tornado Red Volkswagen Golf they received from their parents as a graduation gift; that night my body was just another present piled on top of it And on and on the shape-shifting went until we got tired and slept We were smoothed out like freshly baked carcasses under the rising dawn; and when I woke up I realized that great American love had gone A promising horizon peered over the dashboard, past the Little Tree air freshener peeking through as though it were a mother returning for her runaway child, and saying it's time to come home; breakfast is ready, father is waiting and your future has been put on hold for far too long My first American love was found in the form of a song once the car radio was turned on
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Apr 25, 2016
Apr 25, 2016 at 2:17 AM UTC
Leaving America
My first American love was 4 inches taller than me, had a muscular upper body, (all they did were push-ups, day, and night, day and night) and stood on skinny legs, pale; mustached by thin, fine brown hairs They wore pants, nothing but jeans, black mostly, sometimes faded when they weren't clean; sometimes denim if they were purchased by me (They had to be Levi or Calvin Klein) And their tops had torn sleeves; holes punched in everywhere due to the moths in the closet; nothing but torn seams It was rare they wore anything else We first made love in a 2004 Tornado Red Volkswagen Golf they received from their parents as a graduation gift; that night my body was just another present piled on top of it And on and on the shape-shifting went until we got tired and slept We were smoothed out like freshly baked carcasses under the rising dawn; and when I woke up I realized that great American love had gone A promising horizon peered over the dashboard, past the Little Tree air freshener peeking through as though it were a mother returning for her runaway child, and saying it's time to come home; breakfast is ready, father is waiting and your future has been put on hold for far too long My first American love was found in the form of a song once the car radio was turned on
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Apr 25, 2016
Apr 25, 2016 at 2:17 AM UTC
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