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It was the natural swivel of the barstool When my friend called my name That swung me so abruptly. I swiveled for what seemed like seconds And I looked to where it turned me. Hands over her head and eyes closed I saw that she was small Tilting semi rhythmically to something loud and current. She didn’t notice me because the bar was always crowded and Her eyes were always closed. I felt shaky determination when I offered her the first of many drinks. I walked back to her with no regard to rhythm When whiskey is involved I become aware of how I walk Small, stuttered steps masked by dim bar lighting Everything was disguised in the translucent haze and I felt better. I moved closer and she backed away, enough to make me chase her Speaking and nodding, never hearing, wiping the moisture from our drinks away The condensation never stopping for three years Speaking and nodding, we never heard what the other said besides “one more.” Drinking by each year filtered through the ice in clear, plastic cups.
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Aug 2, 2012
Aug 2, 2012 at 12:08 AM UTC
Swivel
It was the natural swivel of the barstool When my friend called my name That swung me so abruptly. I swiveled for what seemed like seconds And I looked to where it turned me. Hands over her head and eyes closed I saw that she was small Tilting semi rhythmically to something loud and current. She didn’t notice me because the bar was always crowded and Her eyes were always closed. I felt shaky determination when I offered her the first of many drinks. I walked back to her with no regard to rhythm When whiskey is involved I become aware of how I walk Small, stuttered steps masked by dim bar lighting Everything was disguised in the translucent haze and I felt better. I moved closer and she backed away, enough to make me chase her Speaking and nodding, never hearing, wiping the moisture from our drinks away The condensation never stopping for three years Speaking and nodding, we never heard what the other said besides “one more.” Drinking by each year filtered through the ice in clear, plastic cups.
joey-b
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Aug 2, 2012
Aug 2, 2012 at 12:08 AM UTC
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