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I retired as a colonel and am aged 64 years now. My son was enrolled in the army two years ago. He turned 32 years & got married only last year. Today I looked at the lawn and it needed a mow. So I picked up the lawnmower and started to go. A man in military fatigues was coming near now. Not my son but another soldier from his row. I was looking at his face that had said a big no. The soldier came near & stopped to inform in a low but calm voice, 'Sir, I've brought his luggage,' The words seared through my chest like a bullet.
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Aug 14, 2013
Aug 14, 2013 at 5:49 AM UTC
Sir, I've Brought His Luggage
I retired as a colonel and am aged 64 years now. My son was enrolled in the army two years ago. He turned 32 years & got married only last year. Today I looked at the lawn and it needed a mow. So I picked up the lawnmower and started to go. A man in military fatigues was coming near now. Not my son but another soldier from his row. I was looking at his face that had said a big no. The soldier came near & stopped to inform in a low but calm voice, 'Sir, I've brought his luggage,' The words seared through my chest like a bullet.
My HP Poem #400 ©Atul Kaushal
Atul
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35/M/Indian
Aug 14, 2013
Aug 14, 2013 at 5:49 AM UTC
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