Hello Poetry
Submit your work and get some sparkles! Create free account
What aberration would cause: Someone to attend to such foul play, As the annihilation that would pause a life, one filled with the air their being draws. What aggravation could possibly stray, A sound mind into transgressing a written clause Of which all human life agreed to in our laws. What Delusion would bring someone to slay Another human being, meeting the jaws -Of death, as their heart is transfixed by claws, Seeking to steal their life, unafraid to disobey And attempt to take away the life of a young fraus. This crime can not be mended by gauze, Instead, on the heart it will surely weigh, Until it infects the perpetrator and gnaws Picking on every grain, every haws, Til it unravels and will portray The nightmare within, the criminal withdraws From their sanity, only to begin a constant stream of guffaws.
0
Mar 2, 2016
Mar 2, 2016 at 2:00 PM UTC
Attempted ******
What aberration would cause: Someone to attend to such foul play, As the annihilation that would pause a life, one filled with the air their being draws. What aggravation could possibly stray, A sound mind into transgressing a written clause Of which all human life agreed to in our laws. What Delusion would bring someone to slay Another human being, meeting the jaws -Of death, as their heart is transfixed by claws, Seeking to steal their life, unafraid to disobey And attempt to take away the life of a young fraus. This crime can not be mended by gauze, Instead, on the heart it will surely weigh, Until it infects the perpetrator and gnaws Picking on every grain, every haws, Til it unravels and will portray The nightmare within, the criminal withdraws From their sanity, only to begin a constant stream of guffaws.
This is my first attempt at writing a Villanelle. I hope it's alright.
annamarie-jenema
Written by
Mar 2, 2016
Mar 2, 2016 at 2:00 PM UTC
Request permission to use this poem