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A brass barometer lives beneath my ribs; its needle flutters at weather only I can feel. Thoughts wind around repairs, loops of cause & cure, tightening the unseen air. I read distress through pressure in my chest, a metric too subtle to name. Surface remains stoic; under that, doors open for the few I trust; at the deepest layer rests indifference, flat, still, holding every swell in place.
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Jun 8, 2025
Jun 8, 2025 at 3:09 AM UTC
Barometer
A brass barometer lives beneath my ribs; its needle flutters at weather only I can feel. Thoughts wind around repairs, loops of cause & cure, tightening the unseen air. I read distress through pressure in my chest, a metric too subtle to name. Surface remains stoic; under that, doors open for the few I trust; at the deepest layer rests indifference, flat, still, holding every swell in place.
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Jun 8, 2025
Jun 8, 2025 at 3:09 AM UTC
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