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I I was walking through the forest of life when I saw in my path a shade whose spectral form blocked my way to the sweet fruits that lay beyond. II “Who are you, shade?” I asked, “Why do I find you now, in my travels?” The shade spoke not but instead pointed down yonder path and grinned a shade’s grin. III Where he pointed I could see through the space between trees a castle as black as night from where it sat brooding on a high hill. Instantly were the fruits forgotten, so great my urge to reach and enter this castle. IV When I looked again, the shade had vanished and I was alone once more. Quickly I continued down the path and towards my goal. V The way was long and as I finally reached the hill upon which the castle sat night had begun to fall. VI As I looked up, my first thought was that the castle had vanished leaving me alone and lost at the end of the path. VII When suddenly I saw a flame burn from one of its high windows. I realized the castle was still there but as deeply black as the darkening sky above. VIII Soon stars were visible and the contrast of the infinite darkness of the castle against them seemed as if a great black hole had opened up, revealing the never ending darkness that lies beyond what is known. IX Up I climbed until I came to its great gate and with beating heart did I gently push it open and enter the courtyard. X In it stood a fountain, now dry, and beyond that the crimson door through which I would gain access to this mysterious keep. XI As I approached the door I could read the inscription written by its large metal knocker: “Behind you lies what is known, ahead lies the unknown. For what is behind this door changes everything.” XII Slowly did I push the door and it quickly gave in. I passed the threshold and my eyes adjusted to the the darkness inside. XIII As my vision cleared I saw what lay in the middle of the room: a pen and a blank piece of paper.
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Aug 3, 2015
Aug 3, 2015 at 4:06 AM UTC
The Black Castle
I I was walking through the forest of life when I saw in my path a shade whose spectral form blocked my way to the sweet fruits that lay beyond. II “Who are you, shade?” I asked, “Why do I find you now, in my travels?” The shade spoke not but instead pointed down yonder path and grinned a shade’s grin. III Where he pointed I could see through the space between trees a castle as black as night from where it sat brooding on a high hill. Instantly were the fruits forgotten, so great my urge to reach and enter this castle. IV When I looked again, the shade had vanished and I was alone once more. Quickly I continued down the path and towards my goal. V The way was long and as I finally reached the hill upon which the castle sat night had begun to fall. VI As I looked up, my first thought was that the castle had vanished leaving me alone and lost at the end of the path. VII When suddenly I saw a flame burn from one of its high windows. I realized the castle was still there but as deeply black as the darkening sky above. VIII Soon stars were visible and the contrast of the infinite darkness of the castle against them seemed as if a great black hole had opened up, revealing the never ending darkness that lies beyond what is known. IX Up I climbed until I came to its great gate and with beating heart did I gently push it open and enter the courtyard. X In it stood a fountain, now dry, and beyond that the crimson door through which I would gain access to this mysterious keep. XI As I approached the door I could read the inscription written by its large metal knocker: “Behind you lies what is known, ahead lies the unknown. For what is behind this door changes everything.” XII Slowly did I push the door and it quickly gave in. I passed the threshold and my eyes adjusted to the the darkness inside. XIII As my vision cleared I saw what lay in the middle of the room: a pen and a blank piece of paper.
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Aug 3, 2015
Aug 3, 2015 at 4:06 AM UTC
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