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Salvation bleeds its last hopes Upon make believe plains of earth Selfish lies fading the light from within; Places turn around the one's lost here Forming ever changing worlds: A white rabbit on his way. A wandering child going on to nowhere. A brooding sky. A forest of watching eyes. I saw these as I crossed over into here Then formed illusions of my own: A towering castle below silver mountains. A labyrinth, at its center a strange world all its own. A cold season. A curse spelled land. I searched along the riddles to find what I didn't know I was looking for And came to a burning sky Above an acid sea And saw The exiting doorway hanging solitaire between.
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Dec 6, 2012
Dec 6, 2012 at 11:37 PM UTC
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Salvation bleeds its last hopes Upon make believe plains of earth Selfish lies fading the light from within; Places turn around the one's lost here Forming ever changing worlds: A white rabbit on his way. A wandering child going on to nowhere. A brooding sky. A forest of watching eyes. I saw these as I crossed over into here Then formed illusions of my own: A towering castle below silver mountains. A labyrinth, at its center a strange world all its own. A cold season. A curse spelled land. I searched along the riddles to find what I didn't know I was looking for And came to a burning sky Above an acid sea And saw The exiting doorway hanging solitaire between.
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Dec 6, 2012
Dec 6, 2012 at 11:37 PM UTC
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