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Deep into it's sinking depths, You try to swim and catch your breath. Swirling water ***** you in, Daring you to sink or swim. You take the dare, and swim and swim, But the oceans currents have ****** you in, Your drowning now with no hope left, sinking slowly to your death.
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Jan 29, 2013
Jan 29, 2013 at 8:01 PM UTC
Water
Deep into it's sinking depths, You try to swim and catch your breath. Swirling water ***** you in, Daring you to sink or swim. You take the dare, and swim and swim, But the oceans currents have ****** you in, Your drowning now with no hope left, sinking slowly to your death.
i wrote this poem when i was 10 years old. I hope its good.
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Jan 29, 2013
Jan 29, 2013 at 8:01 PM UTC
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