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James and I just like sharpening our minds iron on iron, and tonight we brag we have evolved past the struggle for life then tiny drops of red shotgunned and glittered on the deck silence, like a stalking cop catches us off guard, saunters up the stairs and points at the blood mist on the floor then more, more sprays from our heaving friend wrenched over a stolen desk hacking at red roots in her throat then drawing in her breath through the gravel in her neck sputters in a bubbling little choke stillness is broken by her hand, batting, at the sticky scarlet strings ******* on her chin It’s just Redvines, guys we hear it, unconvinced eyes still stuck to a splatter of stained saliva where something confident had been spit but dribbled like a weakness from her lips but after she had wiped clean the candy bleeding from her teeth we lit and toasted a smoke to long life and to health--- if on us it depends may it never come again.
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Dec 13, 2011
Dec 13, 2011 at 6:20 AM UTC
Red Vines
James and I just like sharpening our minds iron on iron, and tonight we brag we have evolved past the struggle for life then tiny drops of red shotgunned and glittered on the deck silence, like a stalking cop catches us off guard, saunters up the stairs and points at the blood mist on the floor then more, more sprays from our heaving friend wrenched over a stolen desk hacking at red roots in her throat then drawing in her breath through the gravel in her neck sputters in a bubbling little choke stillness is broken by her hand, batting, at the sticky scarlet strings ******* on her chin It’s just Redvines, guys we hear it, unconvinced eyes still stuck to a splatter of stained saliva where something confident had been spit but dribbled like a weakness from her lips but after she had wiped clean the candy bleeding from her teeth we lit and toasted a smoke to long life and to health--- if on us it depends may it never come again.
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Dec 13, 2011
Dec 13, 2011 at 6:20 AM UTC
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