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One look at her and I begin to wonder what is hiding there? Is it the colours in her skin the curls in her hair the look in her eye as she glances far and wide Beyond the scope of this old camera lens no amount of effort is taken to account pinks, blues and blacks all have the same impact Her stare infectious Her eyes so telling Her smile whispers stories of all those saints and sinners Golds reflect and clash with the studios bright lights her eyes are those same sunbeams her body burning them to the ground Look her in the eye studying her face perfection is muted another word needed to replace a name I wish to give her Muse Lacan brought to us the concept of the gaze for how shall she see herself? Like a child's first glance? Alice's long stare? or is she simply oblivious to the beauty she exudes. © Sia Jane ---- *The narration, in fact, doubles the drama with a commentary without which no mise en scene would be possible.* Jacques Lacan
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Dec 18, 2013
Dec 18, 2013 at 9:01 AM UTC
The purloined stare
One look at her and I begin to wonder what is hiding there? Is it the colours in her skin the curls in her hair the look in her eye as she glances far and wide Beyond the scope of this old camera lens no amount of effort is taken to account pinks, blues and blacks all have the same impact Her stare infectious Her eyes so telling Her smile whispers stories of all those saints and sinners Golds reflect and clash with the studios bright lights her eyes are those same sunbeams her body burning them to the ground Look her in the eye studying her face perfection is muted another word needed to replace a name I wish to give her Muse Lacan brought to us the concept of the gaze for how shall she see herself? Like a child's first glance? Alice's long stare? or is she simply oblivious to the beauty she exudes. © Sia Jane ---- *The narration, in fact, doubles the drama with a commentary without which no mise en scene would be possible.* Jacques Lacan
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Dec 18, 2013
Dec 18, 2013 at 9:01 AM UTC
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