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Black Jack looks into the distance where the graveyard trees stand stark. Cold grey day with drenching drizzle, fungus grows on rotting bark. Northern winds they show no pity, leaves fall through the tomb-damp air; Jackie pulls his collar up and spits as passing youngsters stare. (Spare a thought for Black Jack Garside, spare a thought for such as him. Spare a thought for Jackie when the nights are drawing in.) Army trenchcoat old and battered, snake-belt fastened round his waist; hob-nailed boots and moleskin trousers, flat cap shields a ***** face. None could say how old was Jackie, seemed he’d always been around; as a babe, an old tale had it, on a doorstep he’d been found. Black Jack always was a loner, trudging through the village streets; folks said you could smell him coming, never washed and didn’t speak. Mothers with their children walking down the road to village school, all would cross when Jack approached them, “Just ignore him, he’s a fool!” In his house he kept some chickens, in his bath he kept his coal; Black Jack burned a constant fire, lived on eggs and on the dole. Modern times were not for Jackie, internet and mobile phones; with his hens all pecking round him, Jackie lived and died alone. And sometimes when drenching drizzle fills the streets with cold and damp, teenage kids outside the Offy throw stones at a passing ***** Jackie pulls his coat around him, and as laughing youngsters sneer, spits a curse of pure wind-chill, turns and slowly disappears. (c) Hodgsongs 2018
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Jan 9, 2018
Jan 9, 2018 at 5:31 AM UTC
The Ballad of Black Jack Garside
Black Jack looks into the distance where the graveyard trees stand stark. Cold grey day with drenching drizzle, fungus grows on rotting bark. Northern winds they show no pity, leaves fall through the tomb-damp air; Jackie pulls his collar up and spits as passing youngsters stare. (Spare a thought for Black Jack Garside, spare a thought for such as him. Spare a thought for Jackie when the nights are drawing in.) Army trenchcoat old and battered, snake-belt fastened round his waist; hob-nailed boots and moleskin trousers, flat cap shields a ***** face. None could say how old was Jackie, seemed he’d always been around; as a babe, an old tale had it, on a doorstep he’d been found. Black Jack always was a loner, trudging through the village streets; folks said you could smell him coming, never washed and didn’t speak. Mothers with their children walking down the road to village school, all would cross when Jack approached them, “Just ignore him, he’s a fool!” In his house he kept some chickens, in his bath he kept his coal; Black Jack burned a constant fire, lived on eggs and on the dole. Modern times were not for Jackie, internet and mobile phones; with his hens all pecking round him, Jackie lived and died alone. And sometimes when drenching drizzle fills the streets with cold and damp, teenage kids outside the Offy throw stones at a passing ***** Jackie pulls his coat around him, and as laughing youngsters sneer, spits a curse of pure wind-chill, turns and slowly disappears. (c) Hodgsongs 2018
Black Jack was a well known character in the village where I grew up.
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M/North Yorkshire
Jan 9, 2018
Jan 9, 2018 at 5:31 AM UTC
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