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Feel Like Drowning.

sometimes I feel like drowning

 

she told him

fingers threaded through his

 

how come?

 

He lets his gaze fall to hers

ocean meeting river

 

she lets go of his fingers

 

**because this life is just a short horror

story**

 

he hesitates

she looks away

hands in pockets rather than

intertwined

 

*you say that when you know

that's not true, my rabbit girl.*

 

he turns her towards him

face to face, even when her silent

epiphanies have woken her tears

 

he kisses her

tears sweet as sadness

 

*I love you more than the salty

ocean waves*

 

a quick, lightning glance from

a weeping river

 

**it's about time darling

we've got to let this go**

 

he hesitates

a startled lion once more

 

*it's like when you said

that you could not grind your own

skull into the ocean*

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Written by
taylor-tea
American
Published
Jan 30, 2013
Lines·Words
31·136
Notes

The prequel of sorts to my poem "sour sweet".

2012

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