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That last time we talked, my son, the very last, unknown to us, never ventured on profound subjects, (as they do in films or heroic novels) we conversed on the mundane: how did you sleep? What was the food like? or trying to explain the puffed up limbs and pain( having complained to the nurse about your visual state) when you did you pass ***** last? and some such usual things. You were tired your eyes were closing, and unknown to either of us, you were probably dying for the first time, then, without priest or prayer or amen. What was it like that first time? Revived, they called us in, while they set you up to machines and monitors and wires and tubes and all such things. You were comatosed, eyes closed, lying there, hands at your sides, puffy and discoloured. Did you hear us talk? Did you know we were there? We held your hands at the end, my son, wanted you to stay, wanted you to be with us, but death took you quickly, far and away.
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Apr 24, 2014
Apr 24, 2014 at 4:08 PM UTC
LAST CONVERSATION.
That last time we talked, my son, the very last, unknown to us, never ventured on profound subjects, (as they do in films or heroic novels) we conversed on the mundane: how did you sleep? What was the food like? or trying to explain the puffed up limbs and pain( having complained to the nurse about your visual state) when you did you pass ***** last? and some such usual things. You were tired your eyes were closing, and unknown to either of us, you were probably dying for the first time, then, without priest or prayer or amen. What was it like that first time? Revived, they called us in, while they set you up to machines and monitors and wires and tubes and all such things. You were comatosed, eyes closed, lying there, hands at your sides, puffy and discoloured. Did you hear us talk? Did you know we were there? We held your hands at the end, my son, wanted you to stay, wanted you to be with us, but death took you quickly, far and away.
A FATHER CONVERSES WITH HIS DEAD SON.
terry-collett
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Apr 24, 2014
Apr 24, 2014 at 4:08 PM UTC
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