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Who the hell said the Woman had to cook and clean all the time? Who the hell said the Woman had to be the only one to take care of the kids? People, people Can't you do a day to day schedule? Can't you communicate with actual words? Is what i'm, asking too absurd? Isn't it time we polish this spherical **** We created by creating constant years of misconceptions and misconstrued judgement? Is this world what we really want it to be? Maybe personal world have been made, but not overall Not by a shot heard around the world The Lexington veterans are rolling over their graves For my words of mention isn't suitable for all ages Maybe when they're older They'll understand We can't keep it from them forever, you know? We can't keep the prejudices forever, either. Somebody get me a new draft I don't like this one at all Write me a new one or i seek another client to do so. Something has to change, we have to change I'm counting on all of y'all.
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Jan 15, 2016
Jan 15, 2016 at 7:38 PM UTC
New Draft (Old One Is Getting Old)
Who the hell said the Woman had to cook and clean all the time? Who the hell said the Woman had to be the only one to take care of the kids? People, people Can't you do a day to day schedule? Can't you communicate with actual words? Is what i'm, asking too absurd? Isn't it time we polish this spherical **** We created by creating constant years of misconceptions and misconstrued judgement? Is this world what we really want it to be? Maybe personal world have been made, but not overall Not by a shot heard around the world The Lexington veterans are rolling over their graves For my words of mention isn't suitable for all ages Maybe when they're older They'll understand We can't keep it from them forever, you know? We can't keep the prejudices forever, either. Somebody get me a new draft I don't like this one at all Write me a new one or i seek another client to do so. Something has to change, we have to change I'm counting on all of y'all.
peter-r-hamilton
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Jan 15, 2016
Jan 15, 2016 at 7:38 PM UTC
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