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dawn's echo, tender or fierce, takes grip of looser teeth. these loser teeth, i won't eat anything (again). this cold, immutable. frost- bushed lungs. you'll figure it out before i do. one by one, my motives are culled, sugar for some crueler weather's onset. i just wait, and in the end lament all stillness. peace takes time, but mine is all wasted. as if i'd drink less, though. you'll get sober and i'll find another gutter. for a moment, i believed i'd turn out okay. i just lost sleep instead. dreamt of nothing. you are what you dream. wake up earlier every day. turn. pass time inside another headache. this crestfall yields but permanence. make it out south. i could drown i could drown i could drown i could drown but my lungs are already full of water.
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May 13, 2014
May 13, 2014 at 6:45 PM UTC
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dawn's echo, tender or fierce, takes grip of looser teeth. these loser teeth, i won't eat anything (again). this cold, immutable. frost- bushed lungs. you'll figure it out before i do. one by one, my motives are culled, sugar for some crueler weather's onset. i just wait, and in the end lament all stillness. peace takes time, but mine is all wasted. as if i'd drink less, though. you'll get sober and i'll find another gutter. for a moment, i believed i'd turn out okay. i just lost sleep instead. dreamt of nothing. you are what you dream. wake up earlier every day. turn. pass time inside another headache. this crestfall yields but permanence. make it out south. i could drown i could drown i could drown i could drown but my lungs are already full of water.
i could dream, but i'm already nothing.
tom-mccone
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May 13, 2014
May 13, 2014 at 6:45 PM UTC
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