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in a moment of intoxication; a moment of weakness. i broke a promise to myself. a promise i've made to you a hundred times before. never again becomes always again. this is the last time, please                            promise me that. you know me better than i do and you know i can't say no, never to you. i need an escape, but how do i get away?                                                                         you won't let me go. my promises become a reaction, or better yet- a threat. a weak one at that. it's not about the promises you make; but how well you keep them. and i've kept mine, as well as you've kept                                             away.
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Mar 20, 2019
Mar 20, 2019 at 8:58 PM UTC
promises
in a moment of intoxication; a moment of weakness. i broke a promise to myself. a promise i've made to you a hundred times before. never again becomes always again. this is the last time, please                            promise me that. you know me better than i do and you know i can't say no, never to you. i need an escape, but how do i get away?                                                                         you won't let me go. my promises become a reaction, or better yet- a threat. a weak one at that. it's not about the promises you make; but how well you keep them. and i've kept mine, as well as you've kept                                             away.
3-20-19; definitely had some Ellen Hopkins inspiration with this one! :) Love her poetry.
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26/F/Milwaukee, WI
Mar 20, 2019
Mar 20, 2019 at 8:58 PM UTC
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