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It’s occured to me that under the fast food wrappers, my car smells like coconuts, it pulls to the right, and far more people have been inside than I have friends. The first of my class to turn 16, I made them quickly. Under the sweatshirts from days not well planned weather-wise and stray socks, my car smells like driving 80 in a 40, a boy band on the radio, and looks like all 100, 000 of the miles on it. Under the sticky notes and cheap sunglasses from summers I spent somewhere my mother didn’t know I was, my car smells like ***** a bottle under the seat, leaking slightly, my headache the next day was more a give away regardless. Under the mess of a hunk of metal I babied until the AC roared and the key had to be wiggled and the heat only worked on one side, my carb smells like 16 and 17 and 18 and 19; its a forever sort of smell you can’t describe but immediately place. A cacophony of the places I’ve been.
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Jan 18, 2018
Jan 18, 2018 at 12:56 AM UTC
Coconut and The Frigid Wind og Teenage Rebellion
It’s occured to me that under the fast food wrappers, my car smells like coconuts, it pulls to the right, and far more people have been inside than I have friends. The first of my class to turn 16, I made them quickly. Under the sweatshirts from days not well planned weather-wise and stray socks, my car smells like driving 80 in a 40, a boy band on the radio, and looks like all 100, 000 of the miles on it. Under the sticky notes and cheap sunglasses from summers I spent somewhere my mother didn’t know I was, my car smells like ***** a bottle under the seat, leaking slightly, my headache the next day was more a give away regardless. Under the mess of a hunk of metal I babied until the AC roared and the key had to be wiggled and the heat only worked on one side, my carb smells like 16 and 17 and 18 and 19; its a forever sort of smell you can’t describe but immediately place. A cacophony of the places I’ve been.
amandabird
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17/F/San Diego, CA
Jan 18, 2018
Jan 18, 2018 at 12:56 AM UTC
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