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I like songs with rough edges    Ones that sound like they were created in the dusty corners of someone’s garage     Songs that were recorded with ancient                                   and ailing equipment           That play back fuzzy and distorted             Songs that are raw and unfinished              Songs with unharnessed emotion They aren’t mellow or soothing They offend with every beat They have corners and sharp spines They cut and tear with each chord                     I like songs with rough edges Because they can pierce through my skin                            My shields are powerless        All defenses are rendered ineffective                                           I am left exposed I like songs with rough edges Because they force me to feel         The things I had locked out         The things I have been so afraid of letting in         The things that remind me that I'm only human                    I like songs with rough edges                                                          That match my own
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Apr 8, 2014
Apr 8, 2014 at 10:22 PM UTC
Rough Edges
I like songs with rough edges    Ones that sound like they were created in the dusty corners of someone’s garage     Songs that were recorded with ancient                                   and ailing equipment           That play back fuzzy and distorted             Songs that are raw and unfinished              Songs with unharnessed emotion They aren’t mellow or soothing They offend with every beat They have corners and sharp spines They cut and tear with each chord                     I like songs with rough edges Because they can pierce through my skin                            My shields are powerless        All defenses are rendered ineffective                                           I am left exposed I like songs with rough edges Because they force me to feel         The things I had locked out         The things I have been so afraid of letting in         The things that remind me that I'm only human                    I like songs with rough edges                                                          That match my own
jenni
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Apr 8, 2014
Apr 8, 2014 at 10:22 PM UTC
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