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**He clenched it tightly He'd only used it once "You have to pull the trigger first son, and BANG BANG BANG! You can **** anything!" With intense intent on his mind His verge for vengeance grew within, now it's time To show the bullies how he feels** *He glared at them with and intensity of a malicious lion gazing at prey. They stared at him back, paralyzed and gaping, surprised, scared, shivering at the sudden ominous cloud around this figure that once shook with the demons that clawed at his being every minute of the day.* **Teachers deigned to his prowess Consoling him not to shoot He glanced at that kid who kicked him, sneered at how stupid he is. He screamed with angst, blood streaming though his fingers. Trickled to pull the trigger, this is now or never.** *Suddenly, a whimper. He glances away quickly to see his little sister's eyes swim with murky waters. "danny..." He looks away. Then, shoots. one, two, three, four, five. He smiles, watches the chaos erupt the way his mind does every night, stares at the crimson velvet beginning to crawl out of the bodies as the ragdolls crowed with terror of the dead, ghastly large eyes , desperately hollow, wanting only the warmth escaping.* **He feels alive, for the first time he's the fire to ignite the dark Burning everything within his grasp, Dictating any norm in his way. The silence preaching him, Feeling remorse of that obscure stance. He ruptured every enmity that denotes innocence. Screaming, "WHY DO I STILL FEEL SO ******* EMPTY!!??"**
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Nov 2, 2014
Nov 2, 2014 at 4:13 PM UTC
GET DOWN! (collaboration with the amazing Erenn)
**He clenched it tightly He'd only used it once "You have to pull the trigger first son, and BANG BANG BANG! You can **** anything!" With intense intent on his mind His verge for vengeance grew within, now it's time To show the bullies how he feels** *He glared at them with and intensity of a malicious lion gazing at prey. They stared at him back, paralyzed and gaping, surprised, scared, shivering at the sudden ominous cloud around this figure that once shook with the demons that clawed at his being every minute of the day.* **Teachers deigned to his prowess Consoling him not to shoot He glanced at that kid who kicked him, sneered at how stupid he is. He screamed with angst, blood streaming though his fingers. Trickled to pull the trigger, this is now or never.** *Suddenly, a whimper. He glances away quickly to see his little sister's eyes swim with murky waters. "danny..." He looks away. Then, shoots. one, two, three, four, five. He smiles, watches the chaos erupt the way his mind does every night, stares at the crimson velvet beginning to crawl out of the bodies as the ragdolls crowed with terror of the dead, ghastly large eyes , desperately hollow, wanting only the warmth escaping.* **He feels alive, for the first time he's the fire to ignite the dark Burning everything within his grasp, Dictating any norm in his way. The silence preaching him, Feeling remorse of that obscure stance. He ruptured every enmity that denotes innocence. Screaming, "WHY DO I STILL FEEL SO ******* EMPTY!!??"**
italicized is me, and bold is the brilliant erenn. im so honored to be able to collaborate with him on this poem :) thanx erenn!
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Nov 2, 2014
Nov 2, 2014 at 4:13 PM UTC
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