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Across the way I see you there standing hunched with lanky hair. Shoulders slouched, reet drag behind, despair clings to you, no happiness of any kind. Life seems grim, no hope to be found. Eyes bloodshot, spirit soul bound. Tied to a path you don't wanna take. There is nothing you can do to escape your fate. But what if I told you that I had a way, a way to be you, to help you break away? Would you give me a chance, listen to what I say, or is your spirit too broken to believe I have a way? So there you will stay in your empty little shell. I have tried to save you, but you have already fell. Fell into that deep hole where depression sets in & you don't even care, you chose to sink, not swim. A pity, you choose to stay in your world of dark despair until someone pulls you out by showing that they care. This is what I want, want to do for you. We've only just met, yet I know that this is true. Love at first sight is what they'll say this is, but I say it's something else, not just wanting a kiss. It's wanting to show a person that someone is out there, someone to cherish to show that they care. If you let me, you will be my treasure. I'll pull you from depression, show you a life with no measure.
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Oct 1, 2014
Oct 1, 2014 at 11:28 PM UTC
Seven . Swim
Across the way I see you there standing hunched with lanky hair. Shoulders slouched, reet drag behind, despair clings to you, no happiness of any kind. Life seems grim, no hope to be found. Eyes bloodshot, spirit soul bound. Tied to a path you don't wanna take. There is nothing you can do to escape your fate. But what if I told you that I had a way, a way to be you, to help you break away? Would you give me a chance, listen to what I say, or is your spirit too broken to believe I have a way? So there you will stay in your empty little shell. I have tried to save you, but you have already fell. Fell into that deep hole where depression sets in & you don't even care, you chose to sink, not swim. A pity, you choose to stay in your world of dark despair until someone pulls you out by showing that they care. This is what I want, want to do for you. We've only just met, yet I know that this is true. Love at first sight is what they'll say this is, but I say it's something else, not just wanting a kiss. It's wanting to show a person that someone is out there, someone to cherish to show that they care. If you let me, you will be my treasure. I'll pull you from depression, show you a life with no measure.
emily-ryen
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28/F/USA
Oct 1, 2014
Oct 1, 2014 at 11:28 PM UTC
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