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Now for too long drunk in your past, dunked in your past and you know I can't swim, thrashing like an epileptic puppet as each wave gurgled over me. I guess you were a magnet, hurling me toward you like a cricket ball in the air, except I was never caught, the shiny maroon sphere nowhere near your fingers. Had to go and ruin it, spoil it, but there wasn't an 'it', a malleable object for us to **** and poke into our chosen shape. You can't swim back either I suppose, for the city screams at you like an ambulance and my head bobs above the surface, I see silhouettes move no nearer, no further.
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Mar 6, 2013
Mar 6, 2013 at 12:06 PM UTC
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Now for too long drunk in your past, dunked in your past and you know I can't swim, thrashing like an epileptic puppet as each wave gurgled over me. I guess you were a magnet, hurling me toward you like a cricket ball in the air, except I was never caught, the shiny maroon sphere nowhere near your fingers. Had to go and ruin it, spoil it, but there wasn't an 'it', a malleable object for us to **** and poke into our chosen shape. You can't swim back either I suppose, for the city screams at you like an ambulance and my head bobs above the surface, I see silhouettes move no nearer, no further.
Written: March 2013. Explanation: A poem written in my own time - started well, kind of ran out of steam.
reece-aj-chambers
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33/M/English
Mar 6, 2013
Mar 6, 2013 at 12:06 PM UTC
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