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Drinking coffee with two books in my hand listening to Miles Davis’ So What. A few thoughts. The journey is an ongoing float down the river and expanding as time passes. The phenomenon of surrender is fascinating when realizing how it manifests. I find the treacherous peril becomes an observance. The need to climb a mountain and stand on top to see dissolves with the realization there is a better view here. The depths of the dark river are giddily waded through upon discovery of a knee deep sandy bottom. There is an unexpected evenness that can be disorienting until it touches the edge of everything all at once. My life is full of many simple things that left to their own accord, are blossoming into effortless attraction. I’m starting to feel the realization of intention, better yet the lack of concern for the destination. Time dissipates and freedom blankets me. Maybe you see the same kaleidoscope. Hop to, toddEugene
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Jan 30, 2021
Jan 30, 2021 at 9:36 AM UTC
So What
Drinking coffee with two books in my hand listening to Miles Davis’ So What. A few thoughts. The journey is an ongoing float down the river and expanding as time passes. The phenomenon of surrender is fascinating when realizing how it manifests. I find the treacherous peril becomes an observance. The need to climb a mountain and stand on top to see dissolves with the realization there is a better view here. The depths of the dark river are giddily waded through upon discovery of a knee deep sandy bottom. There is an unexpected evenness that can be disorienting until it touches the edge of everything all at once. My life is full of many simple things that left to their own accord, are blossoming into effortless attraction. I’m starting to feel the realization of intention, better yet the lack of concern for the destination. Time dissipates and freedom blankets me. Maybe you see the same kaleidoscope. Hop to, toddEugene
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Jan 30, 2021
Jan 30, 2021 at 9:36 AM UTC
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