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There's roundabouts and bumper-cars and a big wheel and a coconut stall Ingrid said and a rifle range I said I won a goldfish in a plastic bag here once on the rifle range we were at the fairground on the bomb site by Meadow Row bright lights and noise and laughter and people shouting and girls screaming and music blaring out of speakers she was excited to be there her brown eyes lit up like fireworks her brown hair pinned back at the sides with hair grips got to have a go on the big wheel she said I want to go on the coconut stall I said have you money? yes she said 2/- your old man give it to you? no my uncle gave it me why's that? I asked as we gazed around the fair I do things for him she said as we approached the big wheel can't say what it's out secret my uncle said I nodded grimly and we climbed on board the big wheel together and off it went up in the evening sky the Elephant and Castle beneath us our flats visible because the Square lights were on the area was like it had been bombed over night rather than about 15 years before look at that she said pointing and I followed her finger and saw the horizon of lights and it was like an explosion of brightness which brightened up this best of all nights.
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Nov 24, 2014
Nov 24, 2014 at 2:14 AM UTC
FAIRGROUND WITH INGRID.
There's roundabouts and bumper-cars and a big wheel and a coconut stall Ingrid said and a rifle range I said I won a goldfish in a plastic bag here once on the rifle range we were at the fairground on the bomb site by Meadow Row bright lights and noise and laughter and people shouting and girls screaming and music blaring out of speakers she was excited to be there her brown eyes lit up like fireworks her brown hair pinned back at the sides with hair grips got to have a go on the big wheel she said I want to go on the coconut stall I said have you money? yes she said 2/- your old man give it to you? no my uncle gave it me why's that? I asked as we gazed around the fair I do things for him she said as we approached the big wheel can't say what it's out secret my uncle said I nodded grimly and we climbed on board the big wheel together and off it went up in the evening sky the Elephant and Castle beneath us our flats visible because the Square lights were on the area was like it had been bombed over night rather than about 15 years before look at that she said pointing and I followed her finger and saw the horizon of lights and it was like an explosion of brightness which brightened up this best of all nights.
ON GOING TO THE FAIRGROUND WITH A GIRL IN 1950S LONDON.
terry-collett
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Nov 24, 2014
Nov 24, 2014 at 2:14 AM UTC
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