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Is there a kind war? happy dying star? Isn't love without sacrifice- a rose devoid of scent? A deep realization, that perfection is the fragrance of resonating hearts- can sustain bond; love would burn even in times of intense pain, then we would forget, anything that would come between. When I began the walk, down the path of life, you joined hands without knowing what to ask, what is that awaits us, how would we  know, taking your hand, I vowed, everything is for you till the end, The winds may change, the path could be strewn with thorns, fraught with adversities, in this journey we may falter, even fall, I know this in my heart, still you'd whisper soft: "we were united by sacrificial fire how could we ever separate?" a Vedic right passed on to us through millennia, we still embrace, Can just a chant be that magical, make hearts meld together? Am I limiting my chances , of pain by putting a blind on your eyes? Even if I tell that you won't take it not even  for a moment. *Every time your eyes flood, your lips tremble like dragon flies, a stab in my heart I feel, it bleeds, I hold your hand,tight I hear my lips whisper " Sacrificial Fire is our witness"*
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Oct 19, 2012
Oct 19, 2012 at 11:03 AM UTC
On either side of the sacrificial fire
Is there a kind war? happy dying star? Isn't love without sacrifice- a rose devoid of scent? A deep realization, that perfection is the fragrance of resonating hearts- can sustain bond; love would burn even in times of intense pain, then we would forget, anything that would come between. When I began the walk, down the path of life, you joined hands without knowing what to ask, what is that awaits us, how would we  know, taking your hand, I vowed, everything is for you till the end, The winds may change, the path could be strewn with thorns, fraught with adversities, in this journey we may falter, even fall, I know this in my heart, still you'd whisper soft: "we were united by sacrificial fire how could we ever separate?" a Vedic right passed on to us through millennia, we still embrace, Can just a chant be that magical, make hearts meld together? Am I limiting my chances , of pain by putting a blind on your eyes? Even if I tell that you won't take it not even  for a moment. *Every time your eyes flood, your lips tremble like dragon flies, a stab in my heart I feel, it bleeds, I hold your hand,tight I hear my lips whisper " Sacrificial Fire is our witness"*
Fire on the alter is the witness of Indian marriages
k-balachandran
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Oct 19, 2012
Oct 19, 2012 at 11:03 AM UTC
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