(this is a very old writing from me, when i was just starting grade 9)
i wish this boat was going faster; faster
i wish you would have gone, faster; faster
and now im here, in this disaster
that we have made, u left me astray
and im sitting wondering why;
wont you speek?
did i do wrong...
my enemy's have forgiven me, and
you cant even talk.
i see the pain that you did feel, i know its real,
but nothing compared to mine.
you had trust in her; well i had trust in you.
i look out at the water, and i see you dying too.
at one point i wanted to die with you.
i hate the choice that you did chose.
you say SHE WAS EVERYTHING, but i thought
i was too, i know now i mean nothing, nothing to you.
May 18, 2011
May 18, 2011 at 8:39 PM UTC
(this is a very old writing from me, when i was just starting grade 9)
i wish this boat was going faster; faster
i wish you would have gone, faster; faster
and now im here, in this disaster
that we have made, u left me astray
and im sitting wondering why;
wont you speek?
did i do wrong...
my enemy's have forgiven me, and
you cant even talk.
i see the pain that you did feel, i know its real,
but nothing compared to mine.
you had trust in her; well i had trust in you.
i look out at the water, and i see you dying too.
at one point i wanted to die with you.
i hate the choice that you did chose.
you say SHE WAS EVERYTHING, but i thought
i was too, i know now i mean nothing, nothing to you.
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