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If they were Of The People they’d tog in tees The uniform of the Proletariat To demonstrate their unique specialness And admire each other’s piercings and tats Sitting at a bar in dinner jackets Without any irony, just two men And talking with each other, not to ‘phones Quiet voices – so totally not cool Having a few after a semi-do They’ve been noticed1 - not Good Comrades, these two 1“Your attitude’s been noticed.” – Commissar to Yuri in Doctor Zhivago
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May 12, 2018
May 12, 2018 at 4:04 PM UTC
Thoughts on a picture of Two Men in Dinner Jackets
If they were Of The People they’d tog in tees The uniform of the Proletariat To demonstrate their unique specialness And admire each other’s piercings and tats Sitting at a bar in dinner jackets Without any irony, just two men And talking with each other, not to ‘phones Quiet voices – so totally not cool Having a few after a semi-do They’ve been noticed1 - not Good Comrades, these two 1“Your attitude’s been noticed.” – Commissar to Yuri in Doctor Zhivago
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May 12, 2018
May 12, 2018 at 4:04 PM UTC
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