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I. Your comment came to me attached to an ad for condoms, I was so tickled that I saved a picture of the screen, So obvious a sign and one I was so glad to receive. II. When you were angry with me once, Your message said, "I love you. But-" I love you. Period. But. A confession and an admission, A statement of fact and then a feeling, And I felt so bad but you loved me. But-, And that was all I ever asked.
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 1:57 AM UTC
Wine Poem One
I. Your comment came to me attached to an ad for condoms, I was so tickled that I saved a picture of the screen, So obvious a sign and one I was so glad to receive. II. When you were angry with me once, Your message said, "I love you. But-" I love you. Period. But. A confession and an admission, A statement of fact and then a feeling, And I felt so bad but you loved me. But-, And that was all I ever asked.
9/21/14, unedited
natalia-quilles
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 1:57 AM UTC
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