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the sun hid behind the clouds causing the 9am sky to be a dusty blue with rays of sun peeking through every now and then it was mid-winter and the air was crisp it smelt of the new year, full of hopes and dreams, love and life the two of them were found sitting at a little table at a room-large restaurant in the crowded, busy city center she wore a pale yellow shalwaar kameez with a light brown pashmina shawl draped around her narrow shoulders to protect her from the frosty wind which blew back her dupatta he still had sleepy eyes and unmade bed hair she'd dragged him out of bed a little too early it had been a long night, and it had taken a lot of strength to leave his blanket in the early morning hours but looking at her eccentric face right now made him realize he'd leave anything to be with her right now she asked him what he wanted to eat and he was pulled out of the trance, staring into her green-brown eyes reflecting in the morning sun "jo tum kaho" he smiled that little side smile at her, letting her order for him the smile she had fallen in love with on the very first day 8 months ago, in the middle of summer when fate intervened and crossed their paths she called the waiter and ordered two cups of chai and asked him to bring her parathas straight off the stove "and keep them coming!" she yelled after the waiter who walked a few steps away to the tiny corner kitchen wide enough for a single man, maybe two "keep them coming?" he looked at her, a little skeptical "trust me on this one" she smiled widely at him, "if you can't eat them, i will" that made him laugh, he knew she wouldn't be able to handle more than two but he just smiled & nodded, anything she wanted, anything she desired, he couldn't help but grant her she kicked off her khussas and scrunched her knees on the plastic garden chair closing her eyes and inhaling the winter air he looked at her and thought to himself she is my breath of fresh air and somehow, call it a sixth sense, she noticed his eyes on her *"kya dekh rahey ** she pouted her lips "bus...tumhey" he laughed she hid her face in her dupatta "stop it!" she giggled he leaned over the table and pulled her dupatta away, lowering his voice as he said "you're beautiful" she caught her breath, lost in his mahogany eyes- strong, protective, loving the waiter interrupted them, placing their order on infront of them "yay. khaana's here! she yelled to be honest, she was thankful it had come she felt embarrassed by the grip his gaze had on her and she was a little hungry too she reached for a paratha, immediately pulling away and ****** her fingers "it's too garam" she made a face he split the paratha, unflinching, and gave her half "i'm still stronger than you." she said "i know." he made a kissy face at her she wanted to reach over and kiss his pouting lips but she she pretended as if she as unconcerned and began her food a paratha and a cup of chai later she put her hands on her stomach "i'm full" he looked at the three parathas infront of them, the waiter bringing the fourth as per the order he shook his head "tum bhi na." he told the waiter to parcel the rest of the food as he took the last sip of chai the caffeine worked its way through his body and he stretched away the sleep "you're full? chalo, okay, i had planned on ordering gulaab jamuns for dessert. i guess i'll have to eat them alone." her mouth opened in shock, then, realizing he was joking, she smiled cheekily "i always have space for a gulaab jamun or two." he laughed, wondering how she managed to make him fall deeper in love with her as the moments passed they sat under the shade of the gulmohar tree and ate their dessert in silence taking in the beauty of the weather, of the city, of each other, of the moment and as the sun reached for the sky, higher and higher she reached for his hand gentle, kind, warm her touch sent a buzz through his body "i love you" she whispered he could only stare at her delicate pink lips as she spoke realizing he had found within her an everlasting future he smiled at the thought he'd never thought he'd fall in love with such a silly, gulaab jamun-loving girl but now, it seemed like she was the only star in his night sky his shooting star his hope his love.
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Jan 3, 2016
Jan 3, 2016 at 10:18 AM UTC
gulaab jamuns under the gulmohar tree
the sun hid behind the clouds causing the 9am sky to be a dusty blue with rays of sun peeking through every now and then it was mid-winter and the air was crisp it smelt of the new year, full of hopes and dreams, love and life the two of them were found sitting at a little table at a room-large restaurant in the crowded, busy city center she wore a pale yellow shalwaar kameez with a light brown pashmina shawl draped around her narrow shoulders to protect her from the frosty wind which blew back her dupatta he still had sleepy eyes and unmade bed hair she'd dragged him out of bed a little too early it had been a long night, and it had taken a lot of strength to leave his blanket in the early morning hours but looking at her eccentric face right now made him realize he'd leave anything to be with her right now she asked him what he wanted to eat and he was pulled out of the trance, staring into her green-brown eyes reflecting in the morning sun "jo tum kaho" he smiled that little side smile at her, letting her order for him the smile she had fallen in love with on the very first day 8 months ago, in the middle of summer when fate intervened and crossed their paths she called the waiter and ordered two cups of chai and asked him to bring her parathas straight off the stove "and keep them coming!" she yelled after the waiter who walked a few steps away to the tiny corner kitchen wide enough for a single man, maybe two "keep them coming?" he looked at her, a little skeptical "trust me on this one" she smiled widely at him, "if you can't eat them, i will" that made him laugh, he knew she wouldn't be able to handle more than two but he just smiled & nodded, anything she wanted, anything she desired, he couldn't help but grant her she kicked off her khussas and scrunched her knees on the plastic garden chair closing her eyes and inhaling the winter air he looked at her and thought to himself she is my breath of fresh air and somehow, call it a sixth sense, she noticed his eyes on her *"kya dekh rahey ** she pouted her lips "bus...tumhey" he laughed she hid her face in her dupatta "stop it!" she giggled he leaned over the table and pulled her dupatta away, lowering his voice as he said "you're beautiful" she caught her breath, lost in his mahogany eyes- strong, protective, loving the waiter interrupted them, placing their order on infront of them "yay. khaana's here! she yelled to be honest, she was thankful it had come she felt embarrassed by the grip his gaze had on her and she was a little hungry too she reached for a paratha, immediately pulling away and ****** her fingers "it's too garam" she made a face he split the paratha, unflinching, and gave her half "i'm still stronger than you." she said "i know." he made a kissy face at her she wanted to reach over and kiss his pouting lips but she she pretended as if she as unconcerned and began her food a paratha and a cup of chai later she put her hands on her stomach "i'm full" he looked at the three parathas infront of them, the waiter bringing the fourth as per the order he shook his head "tum bhi na." he told the waiter to parcel the rest of the food as he took the last sip of chai the caffeine worked its way through his body and he stretched away the sleep "you're full? chalo, okay, i had planned on ordering gulaab jamuns for dessert. i guess i'll have to eat them alone." her mouth opened in shock, then, realizing he was joking, she smiled cheekily "i always have space for a gulaab jamun or two." he laughed, wondering how she managed to make him fall deeper in love with her as the moments passed they sat under the shade of the gulmohar tree and ate their dessert in silence taking in the beauty of the weather, of the city, of each other, of the moment and as the sun reached for the sky, higher and higher she reached for his hand gentle, kind, warm her touch sent a buzz through his body "i love you" she whispered he could only stare at her delicate pink lips as she spoke realizing he had found within her an everlasting future he smiled at the thought he'd never thought he'd fall in love with such a silly, gulaab jamun-loving girl but now, it seemed like she was the only star in his night sky his shooting star his hope his love.
the weather is too lovely to not write about a little winter romance! x - shalwaar kameez: eastern clothing pashmina: fine cashmere wool dupatta: long scarf "jo tum kaho": whatever you say/want chai: tea paratha: eastern fried bread khussas: traditional eastern shoes kya dekh rahey ** what are you looking at bus...tumhey: just...you khaana: food garam: hot tum bhi na: you're really something! chalo: okay then gulaab jamun: eastern dessert gulmohar: royal poinciana tree
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Jan 3, 2016 at 10:18 AM UTC
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