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1. When she kissed him he lit up like a firework shot into the sky and exploded in jubilant splendor She was not entirely pleased, as he now rained down upon her. 2. When he smiled at her she felt as if the warmth of a thousand suns were inside of her chest. Luckily there was a fire extinguisher nearby Choose your metaphors with care
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Mar 12, 2012
Mar 12, 2012 at 2:02 PM UTC
PSA on Metaphors
1. When she kissed him he lit up like a firework shot into the sky and exploded in jubilant splendor She was not entirely pleased, as he now rained down upon her. 2. When he smiled at her she felt as if the warmth of a thousand suns were inside of her chest. Luckily there was a fire extinguisher nearby Choose your metaphors with care
I don't feel like making sense right now.
j-a-doetsch
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Mar 12, 2012
Mar 12, 2012 at 2:02 PM UTC
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