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Backwards Love

"I love you."

 

Their true feelings spoken, There's something to be said,

To share their feelings - they're no longer weak.

As they lay there in bed.

As they lay there unafraid to speak.

 

They can't see their future without one another.

A deep a relationship, they are almost there.

Emotions still roar like thunder.

Hopes and Dreams, they now share.

 

Not just sleeping together, but Making love.

They hide no secrets, Tell no lies.

Each other - They're proud of.

Arguments now lead to Compromise.

 

It's their first time.

Emotions take over.

Touching, Kissing, Feeling,

Passion - the wait is over.

 

Their feelings for each other, yet again, grow.

Every one gets along fine.

Questions, Answers, Conversations flow.

Nervous - Meeting the family for the first time.

 

He says he wants to be more serious - She agrees.

Relationship is stronger.

Arguments forgiven.

 

Would we happy with each other?

What we have, is this right?

Frustrated with each other.

First fight.

 

He is lost in her beauty.

Many Dates passed, the first now a memory.

Dates and Dinners, Drinks and Movies.

Date two, Date three.

 

The first kiss - He gave her.

A memorable night.

Both on their best behaviour.

A romantic dinner over candlelight.

 

No hesitation shown.

Arranged first date - No-one stalled.

Spoke for the first time on the phone.

Nervous -  Dialling their number, first call.

 

Exciting emotions unlocked.

The start of a relation.

Numbers swapped.

Shared a conversation.

 

"Hello, Nice to meet you!"

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Written by
kaye-b-anderson
Published
Apr 4, 2014
Lines·Words
45·248
Notes

Backwards Love.      READ POEM BACKWARDS

ALSO READ BELOW:

A story told backwards, A poem written backwards. I started from the bottom to the top. From " Hello, Nice to meet you!" all the way to "I love you"

This poem can be read 4 ways:

1) From top to bottom.

2) From bottom to top. (backwards)

3) Read only the sentences in bold, from top to bottom, and of course,

4) Read only the sentences in bold, from bottom to top.

I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.

The name that came to mind for this poem, is 'Backwards Love', since writing this love story backwards was my intention. Though because it can be read four ways, I also thought of the title 'Love - Four ways'. What do you think?

              

   Copyright © 2014 All Rights Reserved by Kayelee (Kaye) B. Anderson.    

Warning: All of my work (poems/creative writing posted on hellopoetry.com) is protected by Copyright laws and I will not take any copying (stealing) of any of my work lightly.

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