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Pathos puddles in young dimples when she raises the gun, a teardrop reflected in Grandfather’s blurry eye. She ***** the hammer, aligns the bullet on the stroke of sepia midnight. Misery, reflected in her tears when he  looks up, ears ringing before she squeezes the trigger; wags his tail to Grandfather’s rhythmic chime, licks his tumour-filled belly one more time. Like a bandit cloaked in purple and ochre camouflage, a stale breeze slips through the window and thieves; the last glimmer of hope kidnapped and forced into mushroom cloud getaway cars. Beyond empty stables, prairie grass whispers last rites, dry and silver solemn sympathy-words that fill the room, watercolours of life reflected in death, as it is, in bloom.
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May 1, 2012
May 1, 2012 at 12:58 AM UTC
Pathos, Reflected
Pathos puddles in young dimples when she raises the gun, a teardrop reflected in Grandfather’s blurry eye. She ***** the hammer, aligns the bullet on the stroke of sepia midnight. Misery, reflected in her tears when he  looks up, ears ringing before she squeezes the trigger; wags his tail to Grandfather’s rhythmic chime, licks his tumour-filled belly one more time. Like a bandit cloaked in purple and ochre camouflage, a stale breeze slips through the window and thieves; the last glimmer of hope kidnapped and forced into mushroom cloud getaway cars. Beyond empty stables, prairie grass whispers last rites, dry and silver solemn sympathy-words that fill the room, watercolours of life reflected in death, as it is, in bloom.
ramonez-ramirez
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South African
May 1, 2012
May 1, 2012 at 12:58 AM UTC
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