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She evaluated, assessed and condemned the mind, and slights of tongue but never attempted to glimpse inside my heart which always swelled and heaved. Those early weekend mornings spent alone   while they slept and the sun climbed broadly in the sky were only safe because of the proximity of their souls, her soul. Maybe the outside doesn't always reflect what it can or should or doesn't show but feels in vast measure the way way a child feels he's being carried. Now idle winds blow seething to be old and free of the minds own burdensome choices and rhetoric about the ice never again getting to melt. Never being freed to move from solid state through flowability, then wind its way with out weight down the road toward yet another chance at redemption.
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Oct 9, 2010
Oct 9, 2010 at 3:45 AM UTC
Saturday Morning
She evaluated, assessed and condemned the mind, and slights of tongue but never attempted to glimpse inside my heart which always swelled and heaved. Those early weekend mornings spent alone   while they slept and the sun climbed broadly in the sky were only safe because of the proximity of their souls, her soul. Maybe the outside doesn't always reflect what it can or should or doesn't show but feels in vast measure the way way a child feels he's being carried. Now idle winds blow seething to be old and free of the minds own burdensome choices and rhetoric about the ice never again getting to melt. Never being freed to move from solid state through flowability, then wind its way with out weight down the road toward yet another chance at redemption.
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Oct 9, 2010
Oct 9, 2010 at 3:45 AM UTC
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