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I don't like haikus I feel they're overrated or maybe I'm bad . . . . . . at using one too few words to render an idea in sweet humble conciseness without the justification for verbosity and yet nevertheless words spill out my mouth like a flash of water inundating a poor little faucet with needless ramble I have to fudge my mind for in conjuring the words I so much desire that a jaundiced outlook on certain Japanese short forms was borne... **** haikus but of course I'd appreciate good ones every now and... **** I ran out of syllables
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Jun 24, 2023
Jun 24, 2023 at 4:26 AM UTC
I don't like haikus
I don't like haikus I feel they're overrated or maybe I'm bad . . . . . . at using one too few words to render an idea in sweet humble conciseness without the justification for verbosity and yet nevertheless words spill out my mouth like a flash of water inundating a poor little faucet with needless ramble I have to fudge my mind for in conjuring the words I so much desire that a jaundiced outlook on certain Japanese short forms was borne... **** haikus but of course I'd appreciate good ones every now and... **** I ran out of syllables
penned june 22 just a little comic relief
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Jun 24, 2023
Jun 24, 2023 at 4:26 AM UTC
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