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singed by acute crossroads         we are marooned through indecision- pulling our weight         trying to lighten the load we bare it as does the earth         and the sun lying on its cot ready to fall beneath the resting place         the coal of the hearth, warm in rage our reflections are true in its image         everything is a mirror if you are willing to accept what you see.         our weight falls from pinning beneath that hibernating skyline         as the sun turns it's red steel cheek. the chains binding us to our burdens         fall with that sleeping illuminator pulling us to the ground, the dirt          turned to mud with our spit, the slime of creation in the eyes          of the god we have failed. only once our tounges rest with the rocks         as the sun does with its cot, may we (in our eyes) look up to the creator,         and ask him to break our chain.
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Sep 26, 2018
Sep 26, 2018 at 5:26 PM UTC
tired were our backs
singed by acute crossroads         we are marooned through indecision- pulling our weight         trying to lighten the load we bare it as does the earth         and the sun lying on its cot ready to fall beneath the resting place         the coal of the hearth, warm in rage our reflections are true in its image         everything is a mirror if you are willing to accept what you see.         our weight falls from pinning beneath that hibernating skyline         as the sun turns it's red steel cheek. the chains binding us to our burdens         fall with that sleeping illuminator pulling us to the ground, the dirt          turned to mud with our spit, the slime of creation in the eyes          of the god we have failed. only once our tounges rest with the rocks         as the sun does with its cot, may we (in our eyes) look up to the creator,         and ask him to break our chain.
a different tone than my other poems, however, enjoy
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17/M/waiting for God
Sep 26, 2018
Sep 26, 2018 at 5:26 PM UTC
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