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The predators of the platform Changing their positions Ready to find a seat To work and back again People close together Thoughts miles away 30 minutes lost in dreams The signs of the train talk to me But I don´t understand them anymore http://poetfreak.com
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Jan 29, 2010
Jan 29, 2010 at 12:22 PM UTC
Commuter world
The predators of the platform Changing their positions Ready to find a seat To work and back again People close together Thoughts miles away 30 minutes lost in dreams The signs of the train talk to me But I don´t understand them anymore http://poetfreak.com
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Jan 29, 2010
Jan 29, 2010 at 12:22 PM UTC
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