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The dusk lies heavy o’er the land, A solemn hush on every strand; And though the world grows cold and wide, I walk where all my hopes have died. The withered fields recall thy grace, A ghost‑light on the empty place; And every wind that chills the air Doth bear thy name in soft despair. For sorrow, ancient as the night, Doth swallow stars and steal their light; And angels, once in radiance crowned, Now tread the dust of broken ground. Their halos, dimmed by grief untold, Burn faint as embers growing cold; And wings that once knew heaven’s height Now falter in the failing light. I wander ’midst their silent fall, Where shattered gleams on shadows crawl; And in that pale, forsaken glow, I feel the ache no dawn may know. Yet still I tread, though hope hath flown, With hollow heart and marrow lone; For love, once bright as seraph’s breath, Now binds my soul in living death.
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4d ago
May 31, 2026 at 2:44 PM UTC
Upon a Quiet Evening
The dusk lies heavy o’er the land, A solemn hush on every strand; And though the world grows cold and wide, I walk where all my hopes have died. The withered fields recall thy grace, A ghost‑light on the empty place; And every wind that chills the air Doth bear thy name in soft despair. For sorrow, ancient as the night, Doth swallow stars and steal their light; And angels, once in radiance crowned, Now tread the dust of broken ground. Their halos, dimmed by grief untold, Burn faint as embers growing cold; And wings that once knew heaven’s height Now falter in the failing light. I wander ’midst their silent fall, Where shattered gleams on shadows crawl; And in that pale, forsaken glow, I feel the ache no dawn may know. Yet still I tread, though hope hath flown, With hollow heart and marrow lone; For love, once bright as seraph’s breath, Now binds my soul in living death.
My quiet confession written in the ruins of light — a wandering heart speaking to the remnants of something once holy. A poem shaped from dim halos, broken vows, and the soft collapse of hope. It carries the hush of wings that no longer rise, and the echo of a love that glows even as it fades. A piece meant to feel like a secret kept between dusk and the first trembling star.
Aetheriel
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16/F/Finland
4d ago
May 31, 2026 at 2:44 PM UTC
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