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You promised you'd be there. You said, and you swore. and though I'm not bitter, my heart's still sore. You said, and you swore as you walked away, my heart's still sore yet I'll live out the day. As you walked away, and though I'm not bitter, yet I'll live out the day you promised you'd be there.
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Oct 2, 2010
Oct 2, 2010 at 1:22 PM UTC
Pantoum of Promises.
You promised you'd be there. You said, and you swore. and though I'm not bitter, my heart's still sore. You said, and you swore as you walked away, my heart's still sore yet I'll live out the day. As you walked away, and though I'm not bitter, yet I'll live out the day you promised you'd be there.
(c) kath otoole - 02/10/2010. A Pantoum obeying the original Malaysian formatting.
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Oct 2, 2010
Oct 2, 2010 at 1:22 PM UTC
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