staring at the sun
pointing at everyone
what are you trying to prove?
you're better? they ain't done
give a man a chance
to change a circumstance
no telling what he can do
he might make you **** your pants
staring at the sun
when all is said and done
this ain't some kind of a game
and nobody ever won
it is a sad world for writers when 10 year olds have easy access to filthy **** but poets get censored
Aug 18, 2021
Aug 18, 2021 at 5:52 PM UTC
staring at the sun
pointing at everyone
what are you trying to prove?
you're better? they ain't done
give a man a chance
to change a circumstance
no telling what he can do
he might make you **** your pants
staring at the sun
when all is said and done
this ain't some kind of a game
and nobody ever won
it is a sad world for writers when 10 year olds have easy access to filthy **** but poets get censored
another i threw together for my lovers...stop wasting your time and making me a better writer haha
syllable counts are fun to play with and with so many variations, you can get a good sense of how rhythm works...of course rhythm depends a lot on vowel sounds, where one might place a comma etc too
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