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i sense a bitter person twisted by life's fate rather call it passion instead of woeful hate life is like a soda bottle shaken with compression bathsheba has released some gas thro poetical expression moralistic fibres unafraid to speak troubled past endured made her strong not weak also sense connection you, myself, and jack we have found a way in life to get **** off our back might be totally wrong, but it's my impression. please let me know
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Mar 6, 2010
Mar 6, 2010 at 11:34 PM UTC
bathsheba's compliment returned
i sense a bitter person twisted by life's fate rather call it passion instead of woeful hate life is like a soda bottle shaken with compression bathsheba has released some gas thro poetical expression moralistic fibres unafraid to speak troubled past endured made her strong not weak also sense connection you, myself, and jack we have found a way in life to get **** off our back might be totally wrong, but it's my impression. please let me know
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Mar 6, 2010
Mar 6, 2010 at 11:34 PM UTC
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