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he almost died when his car built with his hands and time,                                                           and some of his money, rolled over and over and over more times than mortals can                                                               survive the shock of the stop, after the pounding of every three sixty and hit finally a rocky, outcrop. But my friend lived, more bumps and bruises than could be counted, by his girl friend. Years later though, south wind blew overnight with ten more centimeters, of light white powder,                          when two died the slide came down after the copter left,                                                         high in the mountains with no cleft, to hug or find, safe passage as the snow cascaded faster than his car                                ever did, driving him into, through the trees, far he rolled over and over and over, the mass of white powder pushed                                                                                       and pounded                                                                                  until all was still, and he was one of two held tight in the frozen grasp too long until                                                    they found him,                                                         eight others were safe that day, as he told them how to do it the right way, he went first, then the number two, and that was all it took for the monstrous white wall to become larger and harder than a rocky outcrop,                          the only thing that ever made him stop. ©DWE102013
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Oct 17, 2013
Oct 17, 2013 at 11:45 PM UTC
His name was Peter
he almost died when his car built with his hands and time,                                                           and some of his money, rolled over and over and over more times than mortals can                                                               survive the shock of the stop, after the pounding of every three sixty and hit finally a rocky, outcrop. But my friend lived, more bumps and bruises than could be counted, by his girl friend. Years later though, south wind blew overnight with ten more centimeters, of light white powder,                          when two died the slide came down after the copter left,                                                         high in the mountains with no cleft, to hug or find, safe passage as the snow cascaded faster than his car                                ever did, driving him into, through the trees, far he rolled over and over and over, the mass of white powder pushed                                                                                       and pounded                                                                                  until all was still, and he was one of two held tight in the frozen grasp too long until                                                    they found him,                                                         eight others were safe that day, as he told them how to do it the right way, he went first, then the number two, and that was all it took for the monstrous white wall to become larger and harder than a rocky outcrop,                          the only thing that ever made him stop. ©DWE102013
for P M, it will be 30 years this 29 Dec since that avalanche, you still finding powder? be safe, friend
darrell-wade-elverum
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Oct 17, 2013
Oct 17, 2013 at 11:45 PM UTC
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