Poison Ivy,
red rash on my limbs.
To the Doc I go,
a shot will do.
It grows on trees,
but they're immune,
their limbs aren't itching.
*Thanks ~timothy~ for a new style.
This is a syllabic poem in seven lines 4/5 5/4 4/4/5
Unrhymed
Lines 1 and 2 INTRODUCE the SUBJECT
Lines 3 and 4 AMPLIFY what is affected by the image/subject.
Line 5 thru 7 Focus on NEW SUBJECT that complements and provides a meditative conclusion.
Shanzi may be Titled*
Apr 29, 2013
Apr 29, 2013 at 5:23 PM UTC
Poison Ivy,
red rash on my limbs.
To the Doc I go,
a shot will do.
It grows on trees,
but they're immune,
their limbs aren't itching.
*Thanks ~timothy~ for a new style.
This is a syllabic poem in seven lines 4/5 5/4 4/4/5
Unrhymed
Lines 1 and 2 INTRODUCE the SUBJECT
Lines 3 and 4 AMPLIFY what is affected by the image/subject.
Line 5 thru 7 Focus on NEW SUBJECT that complements and provides a meditative conclusion.
Shanzi may be Titled*
Harrogate, TN April 2013
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