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Falling apart is like falling in love But without all the love. Falling apart is like those times Those times when you were a kid and scraped your knee, But there's nobody around Nobody to patch you up. If falling apart is like falling in love Then falling in love is like going whitewater rafting with your partner But you've both got life jackets, and it's a Grade 2 River and it's safe and You're having a great time. If falling in love is like falling apart Then falling apart is like going whitewater rafting with a stick for an oar With no life jackets, in a Grade 6 River which is dangerous and almost suicidal and then Your partner throws you off. Sure, it's exciting Homicide is exciting, in a twisted way, right? But that doesn't mean it's a good thing Because it's bad. Sometimes exciting is bad When exciting is lacking love.
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Nov 24, 2013
Nov 24, 2013 at 5:42 PM UTC
Falling Apart / What is Exciting
Falling apart is like falling in love But without all the love. Falling apart is like those times Those times when you were a kid and scraped your knee, But there's nobody around Nobody to patch you up. If falling apart is like falling in love Then falling in love is like going whitewater rafting with your partner But you've both got life jackets, and it's a Grade 2 River and it's safe and You're having a great time. If falling in love is like falling apart Then falling apart is like going whitewater rafting with a stick for an oar With no life jackets, in a Grade 6 River which is dangerous and almost suicidal and then Your partner throws you off. Sure, it's exciting Homicide is exciting, in a twisted way, right? But that doesn't mean it's a good thing Because it's bad. Sometimes exciting is bad When exciting is lacking love.
sam-conrad
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Nov 24, 2013
Nov 24, 2013 at 5:42 PM UTC
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