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I laid down to die, on the night you said goodbye. You had said we'd try. I wished on stars in the sky, that we would see eye to eye.
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Dec 14, 2025
Dec 14, 2025 at 1:33 PM UTC
Goodbye (Tanka)
I laid down to die, on the night you said goodbye. You had said we'd try. I wished on stars in the sky, that we would see eye to eye.
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62/F/Auburn, California
Dec 14, 2025
Dec 14, 2025 at 1:33 PM UTC
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