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TURTLE DOVE A turtle dove I landed on your chest widened the jagged crack Your Heart chambers shivered quiet silver ripples in a tender Garden of Eden Watching me, your son clapped his hands in orange glee I sought some breadcrumbs which I found upon your stable sea I was vanquished by the I Within your I ©GhairoDanielsPoetry2017
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Dec 10, 2025
Dec 10, 2025 at 4:03 AM UTC
Turtle Dove
TURTLE DOVE A turtle dove I landed on your chest widened the jagged crack Your Heart chambers shivered quiet silver ripples in a tender Garden of Eden Watching me, your son clapped his hands in orange glee I sought some breadcrumbs which I found upon your stable sea I was vanquished by the I Within your I ©GhairoDanielsPoetry2017
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Dec 10, 2025
Dec 10, 2025 at 4:03 AM UTC
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