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Hello to the Tin Man Said the body of various organs Warriors sit in fields of fire Braving heat, metal, and fury Kneeling in the battlefield Swords to stomachs Bullets to brain cavities God Bless America Unpatriotic God Bless the World What's so **** special about the U.S. We have freedom, That's well and good But why can't we wish for blessing Across humanity Avoid warriors in fields of fire Stop braving heat, metal, and fury Don't take a knee in the battlefield Don't even approach it Put down the Sword The bullet can be unspent Thank you soldiers for the fight for freedom, But God Bless Everyone Not just the winners Not just the losers The Tin Man's bent to hell He's seen too much This body of organs Would like to stay intact But the saving of the soul(s) Is far more important
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Dec 8, 2012
Dec 8, 2012 at 2:30 PM UTC
Patriotism might be an endangered animal
Hello to the Tin Man Said the body of various organs Warriors sit in fields of fire Braving heat, metal, and fury Kneeling in the battlefield Swords to stomachs Bullets to brain cavities God Bless America Unpatriotic God Bless the World What's so **** special about the U.S. We have freedom, That's well and good But why can't we wish for blessing Across humanity Avoid warriors in fields of fire Stop braving heat, metal, and fury Don't take a knee in the battlefield Don't even approach it Put down the Sword The bullet can be unspent Thank you soldiers for the fight for freedom, But God Bless Everyone Not just the winners Not just the losers The Tin Man's bent to hell He's seen too much This body of organs Would like to stay intact But the saving of the soul(s) Is far more important
This is a poem regarding a hodge-podge of ideas that I've had recently. I hope I've appropriately spelled out my thoughts to a place where they'll make sense.
m-clement
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Dec 8, 2012
Dec 8, 2012 at 2:30 PM UTC
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